Sunday, April 26, 2009

Research Journal Entry #11- University 106

In preparation for my final project in English 102, I need to revise and do more research for both of the essays that I have written. While working on my essays, I had a few additional ideas for my projects floating around in the back on my head.

For my community analysis essay, I wrote an ethnography focusing on breast cancer support groups. Throughout the paper, I feel as though more research could be used for more direct quotes from my sources. Another aspect from that essay that needs more attention is a part where I described HER2 breast cancer. One of the women I interviewed discussed that she had HER2 breast cancer and because it was rare and couldn’t find resources about HER2, she created her own online support group. In the paper I didn’t discuss what HER2 cancer means. Another area I would like to further explain is laugh yoga. Laugh yoga is sometimes used for some women who are going through breast cancer treatment. I feel that more research will help explain different options for women who are seeking support.

In my argumentative essay I was focusing on whether or not women should be tested for the BRCA mutation. I feel as though this essay was a good piece of writing but the type of research I had to do for this project was somewhat different from the ethnography piece. In this essay I was tackling a tough subject to begin with, so encompassing all the points was somewhat challenging.

In this essay I would like to add more information about the scientific aspect to include to the genetic and biological information. Also researching the ethical issues that surround the BRCA is a very large aspect of the entire subject. Including more information about the ethical dilemma would be extremely beneficial to my paper. I also feel like researching women who have had the testing done would be great for the paper. I feel like adding a personal purpose to the paper, really brings the paper to reality. I would like to conduct to some research among my friends and classmates and with the information they have, whether or not they would be for or against testing for the BRCA genes. I also feel like more direct quotes from women who have had the testing done would help give another perspective and make for a rich and in-depth piece of writing. I also want to focus on the implications of a positive BRCA on insurance records, employment records and other parts of life that could be adversely affected.

I have several ideas to help my paper reach another level. I am eager to use different types of research and make my essays and final project outstanding!

Sunday, April 19, 2009

Research Journal Entry #10- University 106

I started my search using “Clusty” search engine. Admittedly, I get stuck in the Google rut so I was eager to try a new search engine. When I first started, I used the words “breast cancer”. I thought, “Wait a minute, I need to search for the BRCA1 & BRCA2 genes, not just breast cancer.” So I entered the term “brca”. Once the results popped up, I noticed along the left side, in a column, the “clusters”. I found this to be way cool and super helpful too! I liked how it had all of the related topics all together, and then also in the listing of the topics, it had a number by the topics, indicating how many related pages were under that topic.

I clicked on BRCA mutation, to find five sub-topics, more closely related to the mutation of the gene. This was extremely helpful because for this week in English 102, I am making a website all about the mutated BRCA gene. My goal for the website is to inform the general public about what it means to have hereditary breast cancer. As I was discussing my topic with other people in my class, I found that not one person had ever even heard about the BRCA genes before! Using Clusty search engine will help me get a good idea for general topics to touch upon for my website. I have done tons of research (both academically & personally) to gain knowledge about the mutated BRCA genes. So because of that, my understanding of the BRCA genes is far greater than that of the general population. With that, I didn’t want to make my website too in depth; I simply wanted to help people understand what it means to have the BRCA gene(s).

I also think it is super important to include the testing criteria for genetic testing. Again using the Clusty search engine I was able to find the clusters that pertained to who get tested and why they get tested. I search “brca” again, and found “brca testing” in the side topic category. After sifting through all 8 of the pages in the brca testing cluster, I was really amazed to find that pretty much every single one of the pages were useful! Not the case when searching on google or even some of the library databases. Although I realize that not all of these pages constitute being scholarly, they are still very helpful for my goal of creating some high points for my website. Finding and using different search engines will ultimately enrich this project and help enhance my future projects too!

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Research Journal Entry #9- University 106

Citation added:
Simchoni, Sharon, Eitan Friedman, Bella Kaufman, Ruth Gershoni-Baruch, Avi Orr-Urteger, Inbal Kedar-Barnes, Ronit Shiri-Sverdlov, Efrat Dagan, Sigal Tsbari, Mordechai Shohat, Raphael Catane, Mary-Claire King, Amnon Lahad, and Ephrat Levy-Lahad. "Familial Clustering of Site-Specific Cancer Risks Associated with BRCA1 and BRCA2 Mutations in the Ashkenazi Jewish Population." Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences of the United States of America 103 (2006): 3770-774. JSTOR.org. National Academy of Sciences. Albertsons Library, Boise. 15 Apr. 2009. Web.

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First of all, I did not realize there were that many databases!!! Amazing! My most recent essay was about the BRCA1 & 2 genes. If the woman has either of the genes, it predisposes them to developing breast cancer to up to 86% and ovarian cancer up to 60%! When I was writing the paper and doing all the research, the numbers & stats were absolutely staggering! While I was doing that particular research, I kept coming across this information about the Ashkenazi Jewish population, and how they are the one ethnicity that seems to be even more at risk. This is very interesting to me. I read a lot about this, and still seem to be asking “why”? For some reason the women who originate from this particular area of the world, are at a higher risk of developing breast or ovarian cancer. What about their DNA predisposes them to this? This begs the question of if there is an environmental piece to whether a woman’s gene will mutate and then in turn develop breast cancer. Is there some chemical, some type of food, something all these women were exposed to, what could it be? What is the link and if it happened to this particular group, can it happen again? Is it something that passed down genetically, or is it “in the water”? I’m also wondering why not other groups of women in neighboring areas near the Ashkenazi Jewish women, aren’t at such a risk. So if this gene is so prevalent in this group, is there a group that is not at such a high risk? What can be done to find out this information? I guess just time and testing of as many women as possible will give us the information and data we so desperately need to really find out the what’s and why’s of the BRCA genes. Along the same lines, what can be done to raise awareness about BRCA genetic testing. Knowledge is power and the more you know, the better you can handle your body and the challenges. To me the chance of developing breast cancer up to 86% is ridiculously high. To figure out what can be done to either change this, learn more about this or stop the mutation, seems vital to discovering a cure for breast cancer.

Sunday, March 29, 2009

Reseach Journal Entry #7- University 106

This is the link to my Wikipedia post:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Breast_cancer#Epidemiology_and_etiology

18. ^ Braddock, Suzanne W., Jane M. Kercher, John J. Edney, and Melanie M. Clark. Straight talk about breast cancer from diagnosis to recovery: a guide for the whole family. Omaha, Neb: Addicus Books, 1994.

When I first read this assignment I thought it would be super easy. I had an idea of what type of information I could add to the Wikipedia site but once I got looking—it wasn’t so easy. The argumentative essay I am writing is about breast cancer and focusing mainly on the BRCA genes found in women. If the woman has the BRCA2 gene, she is 86% more likely to develop breast cancer in her lifetime, than a woman who doesn’t have the gene. The point I am arguing is whether or not to have the genetic testing done, and what testing positive for the BRCA gene means to the woman. I searched for articles through the Academic Search Premier Database. I found a lot of great articles but couldn’t seem to pinpoint one that I felt would add substance to the Wikipedia site. I had several books from the library that I used for my last paper so I decided to take a gander at the table of contents. Bingo! I found a few small sections about the BRCA genes. I felt as though the statistical information would give the site, which was about breast cancer in general, more data about the BRCA genes.

On the technical side of things, adding a citation to Wikipedia was really easy and virtually painless. However, as I had mentioned before, pinpointing which information was slightly more difficult. The reason I felt it was tricky was because initially I wanted to add to the BRCA gene page. There was so much detailed information, and the other articles I thought would help—would only have been redundant. I was stumped for a little bit, and caught myself not thinking outside the box! I stepped away from my computer and thought about all the ways that one would seek information about the BRCA genes. That’s when it struck me that I could add to the general breast cancer page! The help pages were very thorough, made the process of adding the citation very simple. I honestly never knew that I would be just that easy.

As far as comparing the differences in citing sources in Wikipedia or in an essay, it was somewhat similar but the challenge arose with something that would add high value to the Wikipedia site seemed to be a bit more challenging to me. Perhaps it’s because I have never edited a Wikipedia page before, but it just felt a little foreign to me. I also felt this overwhelming responsibility to add something that people will actually find interesting. When writing an essay, you form the idea about what the focus will be and go from there, so all your sources added together create the whole informative picture. With the Wikipedia site, I felt like I had to have a hard hitting bit of information. This assignment helped me to see how important citing sources are, and also helped me to understand exactly how Wikipedia works.

Sunday, March 15, 2009

Research Journal Entry #6- University 106

In the essay I just cited, I found it fairly easy to cite my sources. Last semester was a completely different story though. I have been out of school for ten years, and honestly don’t really ever remember having to cite anything in my high school English class. We were also never required to write a term paper either, which I find extremely unusual now, but that is beside the point. For some reason, working on this most recent paper and citing sources seemed to come naturally to me. Perhaps because I learned last semester or maybe it was because I changed my strategy this time around. Last semester I had a difficult time meshing my sources with the other information in the essay. I felt as though I was trying to force a square peg through a circle shaped opening! I believe the main difference for this essay was how I determined the information that would be a part of my essay.

In the early stages of writing my essay, I went to the library, and found several books that seemed like they might have some valuable information in them. I scanned over them at the library, and decided that five of them would come home with me. As I made the outline for my paper, I knew the main points I would like to focus on and from that, sought out that specific information. Compared to last semester when I went to the library, found books, found information and made that the basis of the paragraph and filled in around it. This time I already had the points I would like to have stronger supporting information, and found the pertinent information. Once I had those several sources, I wrote my paper according to my outline and then sifted through my sources, adding them in where I felt they best belonged. After I was finished with this essay, I went back and read the essay from last semester. What a world of difference this made! The paper this semester seemed to flow so much better and the sources I used had much more relevance to the paper.

The reason it is so important to cite sources in your paper, is because you have information that may be scientific or someone else’s point of view. When you cite those sources, it shows that you have reached out and done a thorough job in your research. I believe it adds validity to your paper that you otherwise wouldn’t have without citing sources. It is required to cite sources for academic papers so you have an authoritative paper and also so you don’t plagiarize by using someone else’s words or ideas without giving them credit.

Sunday, March 8, 2009

Research Journal Entry 5- University 106

The reference resource that I decided upon was under the “Acronyms & Abbreviations”. Once I navigated to that page, I went on to the page where there were three acronym searching sites. They were Abbreviations and Acronyms of the U.S. Government, All that JAS (Journal Abbreviation Sources) and Acronym Finder. I decided to focus on the Acronym Finder. The type of information on this site is a resource that helps to find the definitions of over 750,000 acronyms, abbreviations or initialism. It also has the search option to find over 850,000 US and Canadian postal codes. Once you input an acronym you need defined, it pulls up all the possible results. There is also an option to filter the returned results into categories like; Information Technology, Military & Government, Science & Medicine, Organizations & School Etc, Business & Finance, Slang, Chat & Pop Culture or all definitions. The search tool also has the option to input a word, and then it will give a list of abbreviations. The results are all links that upon selecting them, it defines the word. Along the left side of the results has a ranking system. At the top of the page, where you input the word or acronym, there is an option to select “abbreviation”, “word in meaning” or “location”.

I used a couple of different strategies to learn more about some breast cancer acronyms. In some of my research I kept seeing a particular acronym- DCIS. I had looked it up at one point but it didn’t give the definition, it only defined the acronym. Another strategy was to input the general term of “breast cancer”. When I saw some of the acronyms it jogged my memory and I searched more terms I had come across, that I had found early in my research. Many of the acronyms looked familiar but searching it helped me to find, and define some of the terms I was unsure of. I believe that it will help to enhance my research projects.

This search resource will be helpful in many ways. Using this resource in my ethnography will give my paper a rich and authoritative stance. Know and utilizing the discourse within my community really helped me when I interviewed the breast cancer survivors. I was able to focus on what they were discussing during their support groups rather than wondering what in the world they were talking about. I could fully understand their acronym, even when they were using acronyms. There are so many acronyms in medical terminology, and to know the abbreviations or acronyms mean that I can dig deep into the community.

The entire reference resource page contains so much information! I’m excited to use this in upcoming projects in other classes.

Sunday, February 22, 2009

Research Journal Entry 4- University 106

When I first read the assignment to create a mind map, I thought it would be difficult to come up with that many unique terms. However; once I started, the flood gates opened! Doing a simple search with my generalized topic in mind, really helped to get me thinking in different ways. I felt that looking through the titles of the books as well as the descriptions, forcibly jogged my memory into conjuring up different off shoots from my topic of breast cancer.

When I started laying out my mind map, I did have a little bit of trouble putting everything into particular categories. Some of the terms were easy to decipher where they should go but others were slightly more ambiguous. One term that I had a hard time with is “multi-cultural aspects of breast cancer”. To me, that particular term doesn’t seem to mesh well with any others. As I started the organization process, I feel as though I have a firm grasp on what goes where and why.


This assignment helped me to see how narrow I can go with my research project. Although I feel as though I know basically what each unit will consist of, doing this project opened my eyes to other possibilities. Ultimately I believe that this will make for a much richer research paper.

Sunday, February 15, 2009

Research Journal Entry 3- University 106

My topic has not changed from last week. I am still focusing my research on the community of breast cancer survivors and also considering writing an argumentative essay about the BRCA genetic testing that can pre dispose women to getting breast cancer, with the chances being as high as 85%, if one tests positive for the gene. In terms of the community of breast cancer, I am going to focus on testing, treatment, support and also the genetic testing.

When I was watching the tutorial about how to use the advance search techniques, I was very surprised to learn that there were several things that I didn’t know about the advanced search. One thing that really surprised me was the option to input terms that you don’t want to contain in the search. That was really helpful because when I was searching prior to learning this, the results would come back with a lot of scientific information that really wasn’t pertinent to my search. When I was able to remove those few items, I was able find far more useful information about the personal standpoint of breast cancer.

The Web source that I used was a .org page that is a non-profit organization. The URL for my source is: http://www.facingourrisk.org/.

The reason I chose this Web source was because the information on the website was exactly what I needed. After learning about what makes a site authoritative, I followed the criteria in order to tell whether or not the website was a good one or not. The site I chose is for a non-profit group and there were two indications right away that led me to believe that the site was trustworthy. Both clues I found at the bottom of the page. The first thing being an “HONcode” which is given to websites, which verifies the website provides a standard of trustworthy health information. The other clue I found was a “Guide Star” logo which indicates that the site is recognized through the online non-profit accountability standard. The site also offers other clues that it is a reputable website. The contact information is thorough and all of the links on the site are up and working properly. Overall I feel as though this site has a lot of great information to be used as a potential source for my research paper.

Sunday, February 8, 2009

Research Journal Entry 2- University 106

The topic that I have decided on for this semester is breast cancer with a focus on the study of BRCA genes 1 & 2. My topic has deviated somewhat from last week. I was thinking about choosing breast cancer support and breast cancer survivors. One of the reasons that I decided to change my area of interest is because genetic testing and what someone does with that information is highly controversial. Some women who are testing positive for one or both of these genes are taking radical measures to ensure their health and longevity. I find this extremely interesting. I also believe that through efficient research I will be able to find information on both sides of the coin, in respect to post genetic testing decisions.

The terms that I used while searching for an article were; genetic testing, BRCA, genetic testing effects, breast cancer BRCA, and BRCA 1 & 2. All of the terms worked well, on varying levels. Upon searching BRAC, I was able to find information about the more scientific side to the genetic testing. The keyword that yielded the article I found was BRCA 1 & 2. The psychological effects of genetic testing are extremely intriguing to me. I felt as though all of my searches were very helpful in finding pertinent information.

There are actually several things that I appreciate about Academic Search Premier. One thing is the option to generate text for citation in the correct format. I also really enjoy the full text option in the search tool. I feel as though the entire program is laid out very well. Honestly, I haven’t come across anything that I don’t enjoy about the library search resource. The section on the far left side, where you can chose to narrow the result by topic, is very helpful. I look forward to using it and becoming for familiar with the options available.

This is the citation from the article that found;

Smith, Ashley Wilder, et al. "Psychological distress and quality of life associated with genetic testing for breast cancer risk." Psycho-Oncology 17.8 (Aug. 2008): 767-773. Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. [Albertsons Library], [Boise], [Idaho]. 5 Feb. 2009 .

Sunday, February 1, 2009

Research Journal Entry 1- University 106


The topic that I have chosen for my research community is breast cancer and with a focus on breast cancer survivors. I was hoping to find a book that covered many aspects of breast cancer, to include: the personal struggle and support that the patients required through their journey. I initially started the search using the keyword “cancer”. I must say that was very overwhelming with 1,253 results in all! I then decided to enter the words, “breast cancer” which returned a list of many books that were primarily focused on the scientific and medical aspects of cancer. After editing my search, to “breast cancer survivors”, I was able to find far more pertinent books.

The book that I settled on was a book titled, “B.O.O.B.S. : a bunch of outrageous breast-cancer survivors tell their stories of courage, hope, & healing”, compiled & edited by Ann Kempner Fisher. I decided on this book for several reasons. First of all, I believe that so much more can be learned about breast cancer from a survivor, as opposed to learning from a medically scientific standpoint. The cover of the book also grabbed my attention because from what we can see on the cover, it appears to be a naked woman, only showing her smile and stopping just above where her breasts begin. Revealing just her bare chest, yet not exposing anything more. In the place of where the breasts should be, are the letters B O O B S, in large print spread across the picture. Also the title tells so much about the contents of the book. It is widely known that some partial success of overcoming disease is having a good mental outlook and preparing accordingly.

I felt as though my search was very worthwhile, yielding copious amounts of books, articles, journal entries, amongst other types of useful information. Since I will be studying and researching a very popular & frequently written about topic, I will need to be able to sort through many sources. Narrowing my search using effective key words will be very important. One thing that I would do differently on the next search would be to really narrow my search keywords down at the beginning, in order to save some time.

One thing that I have definitely learned through accomplishing this assignment, is that having this resource available to me will be so valuable over the course of the semester and for the rest of my college career. Anyone can research but I think it’s all about being to able to research efficiently in order to really create a productive & sound piece of writing.